If there's going to be 47000 more words like that I'm definetely in for the read! And I know the feeling about having to get the story to where you realy want to have it but not quite getting there. I had that as well, still think the fisrt 5000 words or so I typed are complete crap, just to get me to where I want the story to be, but after that it just all clicked together and I've been typing for three nights in a row now being absolutely happy what is coming out of my fingers. So just keep at it!
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