http://ruham.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ruham.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] solarbaby614 2010-04-06 06:09 pm (UTC)

Mordred as Merlin's little brother is just brilliant! As is the rest of your fic. Like, awesomely brilliant. I love it!

Just a typo, here: ...and other druids with looked with reverence. Maybe "with what looked like reverence"?
Apart from that mini-little typo: WOOOOP! XDD
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